I really liked this chapter. I like how you have this chapter in Mikey's mind while he's in his coma and like what he's thinking and then he sort of wakes up at the end. I can't wait to see what Frank and Gerard will do! Keep updating. It's really excellent I think you should be proud of it!!!
Author's response
Thank you very much; I'm really glad that you liked this chapter. I, personally, wasn't a huge fan of this chapter so it's a relief to know that you liked it.
I'll try to update tonight.
Thank you sooooo much for taking the time to leave a review; it really does mean a lot! :)