This chapter was great. I love your layout. You have some dialogue and then you have what's going through Gerards mind. I really like that. This is a fantastic story. And I can't stop reading it. Keep on updating!
Author's response
Thank you very much; I'm very glad that you liked it! I'm relieved that you liked the layout, I was kinda worried it was dragged out/boring/confusing.
I'll probably update on either Sunday or Monday because I'm being forced to go to some London party tonight.
Thank you soooo much for taking the time to review; it really does mean a lot! :)