I really like your writing style. You paint a very vivid picture, it kinda feels like were in a movie and I can hear a female voice reading the words while we look down on the scene.
I like the detailed description of the characters and the surrounding.
It was a great start, made me want read more!
Author's response
Thank you very much! :) I do try to write it like a movie, so I'm happy that that's how it comes across :)
Thank you for reviewing! xx