I think it would be a great idea if you made some chapters about what everyone did that night.
It's so sad about what 30STM is doing! I really wanted to go to one of their concerts.
ps: I love your story!
Author's response
Thanks for your input, and I've already started writing one from Ryan's pov, and I'll work my way round the couples ;)
I was devastated, cuz I wanted to go and see them live too! SADFACE!!
Thank you for reading my random scribblings, it means a lot :)