Review for Personalised Stories :D

Personalised Stories :D

(#) EmsJayify 2011-12-24

Name: Emma Hayes

Nicknames: Ems, Em, but generally is just called Emma.

Person You Wanna Be With: Frankie c:

Looks:- (i've split it for you haha)

Hair: Bright red (like Party Poison's) that goes down past her shoulders in layers. She has a side-fringe that covers her right eye, she never lets people see underneath it because she has a cut down that side of her face and she thinks it makes her look ugly.

Skin tone: Very pale.

Build: quite tall (5'6) and slim. Has an hourglass figure and doesn't show it off that much.

Eyes: Hazel c:

Make-up: Black eyeliner and mascara, concealer to cover her wounds and black nail polish

Clothes: Dark skinnies held up by a studded belt, a band tee (Like Anthrax, Muse, Misfits etc), A blue hoodie with safety pins stuck in and fingerless skeleton gloves.


Personality: Bright and Happy, she's always in a good mood and would die for her friends. She gets abused olot but she says it makes her stronger.

Likes: Being with friends, drawing, music, playing the drums and Frank haha

Dislikes: uncontrolled fire (she gets freaked out by lighters), sharp objects, needles (has a phobia), people that insult/threaten her friends.

What You Want To Happen/Be About: Well, I was thinking that Emma and Frank could be best friends in Highschool... Emma could have an abusive boyfriend and like Frank, and Frank could like her back secretly. Emma could get beaten up and taken to hospital because she has a bad concussion and Frank could stay with her in hospital until she's better, and then kiss her or something?


I suck at summerising shit, but I hope that was okay haha. Change anything you need to c:



Can't wait to see what you come out with! :3