I just read this whole story and it's so beautiful:)
It's got such a beautiful start and a beautiful end, with interesting dialogue and climax. It's just great! I love how you ended it and how Frank found Mikey and.. everything.
It's great. Really well done. :)
I don't really have much to say at the moment haha, sorry. But it was really good. :)
Merry Christmas!
Author's response
Awww, thank you sooooo much! I'm super pleased that you thought this story was alright and that it was interesting; I was really worried that it was kinda dull/boring, so it's really uplifitng to know that you found it interesting.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review; it really does mean a lot! Merry Xmas!!! :D