--Ron laughed loudly. “That’s mean, Neville!”
Neville shrugged. “I learn from the best.”
“Thanks, Nev!” Ron said with a smile.
“Oh no, I meant Snape,” Neville corrected him.-- That's funny!
This was a good chapter. Lockhart is at least passably competent, which just makes him all the more insidious if he is still a fraud in your story.
I am curious about something. I was wondering what others would see if viewing Harry's memories in a Pensieve. The curse makes them see a girl, but would they still see that if they were watching /harry's memory/? After all, if they are watching Harry's memory, there are supposed to see what Harry sees. The photograph thing didn't do anything because the photograph shows everyone what everyone saw. I wonder. Maybe Harry will be further frustrated. They will see a black-haired green-eyed boy, and say 'Who is that?' And when Harry tries to say 'That is me' they will be all 'What are you even saying?'
Well, I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's response
This is a GREAT point. But here's something to consider: What did the Sorting Hat see? And how is a Pensieve different or not?