I loved this chapter - it really hit a chord in me, like with the whole making friends with Mikey bit and the small smile. I loved it, every moment. Your writing is so evocative. I swear I can see the classrooms in my head, so picture perfect and clear. I can almost feel the pain of being beaten or the cold jersey weather. Its not just a flat story, youve made each character 3D and believable. Your an amazing writer and I adore this fanfiction.
Author's response
This review made me smile so much...thank you :') What you just said means a hell of a lot, and thank you so much for taking the time to give me your opinion...it is much appreciated (:
Will update soon :D
CosmicZombie xo