Hey, it might have been a bit corny, but that's fluff for ya! Besides, it was perfect for this chapter, every Frerard needs a little fluff. xD
Please don't make it crash and burn to badly! This seems way to perfect for that! Oh wait, now I see why it must happen. Nevermind, I won't try to change your epicness!
Author's response
Yeah, I suppose fluff isn't too bad in small quantities, I just hate writing it!
I'm lost though, what enlightened you to the fact it's gonna crash and burn?
Sx