Review for Never Coming Home

Never Coming Home

(#) monstrice901 2011-12-30

Oh fucking hell, I said the last chapter basically had me in tears, this did. I'm not even joking - you wrote it that well that I'm crying. It's just so sad. It's really, I have no idea what the word I'm looking for is, and I'm not gonna say good 'cos it had me tears. But this story is amazing, if really really depressing!

From a slightly more detached point of view, this was really well written and you got the emotions across really well. Hence the reason I'm in tears.

Frank's just so stupid! Great, I must be PMSing.

Keep it up, and I can't wait 'til the next chapter - they get better and better.