This chapter was brilliant too. What really interested me about this is that it's more personal about Mikey. I never realised before, but we didn't know anything about his room, or his parents. And I think you captured his room perfectly, I can imagine the photos on the wall being something really important to Mikey, and he's never outright said anything about his parents so I love how he chose Pete to trust and tell. I also really liked how he didn't stutter with Pete, so we knew he'd chosen to trust Pete but Pete didn't know yet.
More amazing writing!
Author's response
Thank you very much, I'm soooo pleased that you think this chapter was alright; I wasn't sure if it was any good because I'm crap at writing romantic (if you'd call it that) chapters so it's really encouraging to hear that you liked this chapter.
I never really gave his room much thought before, so it was new territory for this story. I'm relieved tha you think I did it alright, I wasn't sure if it fitted the story or not.
Thank you sooooooo much for taking the time to reiew! :)