First off, I love your writing style. Its unique and gives the necessary detail. :)
Secondly, WHERE ARE YOU FROM?XD
I live in Exmouth, Devon, which is right next to Exeter. So when I read about these places I was like, "Wow." haha. My Dad actually lives in Exeter :)
Anyway, I think this story seems really interesting so far and I'm intrigued as to where you're taking it.
Author's response
Thank you so much! :') I'm afraid that i ramble and people can't understand what I write haha xD
I'm from Devon haha, I decided to write about me being from there seeing as I know the area! i like in Ivybridge, near Plymouth though! Must have been freaky for you to read haha!
Thank you very much! I hope you'll like it, i'm writing the next chapter as we speak!
Thanks for Reading and Reviewing! :')