Review for Perfectly Imperfect

Perfectly Imperfect

(#) MCRmilify 2012-01-01

Gerard needs more than a leash, he needs a straight jacket and a tiny cage. -_-
Ok I didn't know Gerard was that stupid. How could he talk about his own brother like the only thing that matters about him is that he attempted suicide. Just because he's not emotionally stable does not mean he shouldn't make friends. I can understand him being uncomfortable with this ripped 18 year old guy on top of Mikey, but I cannot understand how he can assume that Pete is a horrible person.
If Pete and Mikey's relationship is damaged because of this I'm going to kill Gerard multiple times with my mind fists.

Author's response

Gerard was being extremely stupid. But it was the kind of stupid that was caused by his overprotectiveness of Mikey. At least, that's how I wrote it as; I hope that came across. I'm sorry if Gerard's behaviour seems unbelievable; I just kinda wrote it as though he's terrified of his little brother getting his heart broken by some ripped eighteen-year-old, so I hope that did come across.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review; it really does help! :)