Wow. This story is extraordinary! I'm sort of reviewing here for the last chapters cause I had no Internet all week and I couldn't read the new chapters. This is so brilliant. I can't explain. I have tears coming out of my eyes. So much suspense. I like how Gerard has sort of changed to being more innocently evil if that makes any sense at all! He doesn't understand Mikey at all because he won't give Mikey the chance to tell him stuff like Pete and about school. I think you have carried on this sequel really well and I can't wait for more!
Author's response
Aww, thank you very much; it's really uplifting to know that you like this story!
I completely understand what you mean about Gerard being 'innocently evil'; like he's being horrid without even realising it and is saying these things because he just wants to help.
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a nice review; you really have made me smile! :)