Once again I can't explain how great this is. It's flawless and it is definitley not crap. Not even near it. It really is an awesome story. You better update soon please cause I really wanna know what happens to Mikey and if Pete gets there on time. Can't wait for more please
Author's response
Aw, thank you sooo much; I'm really, really glad that you think this story is alright, it really is very nice of you to say so.
I'll try to update tonight.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review; you've made me smile! :)