This was good. It was sad cuz they killed themselves. And don't be nervous. Writing a story isn't that bad. But I really loved this. Adding it to my favorites. Your a good author :D
Author's response
Thanks! I wouldn't really consider myself as a good author, because I don't tend to write much but I think I will start doing so a bit more now ^.^
And by the way, I read alot of your stuff, so uhm, I'm a big fan of yours x)