Review for Perfectly Imperfect

Perfectly Imperfect

(#) GallonsOfBlood 2012-01-05

Another fantastic chapter! And this time, when I finished reading, I sort of felt like dancing around everywhere because happiness and Pete and Pete will help Mikey get better but also later conflicts and /Gerard trouble later on/.

Basically this really had me thinking about all the different possibilities of the story and everything you've written so far.

By the way-I really loved that bit about playing in traffic. I thought it was great that Pete can make mistakes too, but it also shows how much Mikey trusts him with how easily he lets it go after knowing that Pete is truly sorry.

Author's response

Thank you very much; I'm soooo pleased that you thought this chapter was happy!
With the playing-in-traffic thing I wanted to show that Pete, whilst undeniably amazing, isn't perfect. So kind of exactly what you picked up on.
Thank you sooo much for taking the time to review!! :)