Wow.
You have a way of writing that explains everything that needs to be known, but doesn't overwhelm the reader with information. Everything is neat and precise, and perfectly in it place, my ocd shows there doesn't it?)lol. I'm hoping that got my point across, though it probably didn't.)
Anyway, this is very well written, you get into Kyouyas personality so well, and the way you have things written out is... kya! fangasm. I can't wait to check out more of your work, the sequal to this is already open in another window. I just wanted to take the time to express how much your fic was enjoyed.