What do I think? Man alive, that was good! Loved the whole relationship between Frank and Gerard, you wrote it fantastically. It had the perfect amount of subtlety and out-thereness (can't think of the opposite of subtle...) and I loved the whole "trust" theme. Really well written as well. Amazing work!
SF
Author's response
Thankyou so much it means a lot! thank you for reading and leaving such a kind review!