I love this chapter as much as Pete loves Mikey. It is quite disturbing what Mikey gets himself into during his nightmare thing. It's really sad. But none the less a terrific story! The last part when Mikey fell asleep was really sweet. You are excellent at writing this. I don't know how but everytime you write something I just seem to love! Keep updating please!!!
Author's response
Thank you very much; I'm soooo pleased that you liked this chapter!
I kinda wanted what Mikey did to be a little disturbing so that it would, I dunno, shock(?) people into thinking that he really isn't happy and would be enough to make Pete see that something serious really is going on in Mikey's head. Sorry that it was sad, I hope that it wasn't too depressing.
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a nice review; it really does help me to write! :)