Go kick his ass Pete! I don't know if you have been able to tell, but I don't like Gerard. The way you wrote about Mikey's nightmares really pulled on my heart strings as did Pete's little speach at the end. The dialog was great there is no need to worry about it. Oh those two are the perfect couple. I can't help but wonder what's happening with Frank and Gee though I mean Mikey's ran off into the cold night for all they know he could be in the same place as the prequal CARE MORE YOU GUYS IT'S MIKEYYYY. Super awesome chapter! C:
Author's response
I don't think that Pete needs any encouragement to go kick Gerard's ass. ;P
I'm glad that you don't like Gerard in this story, it's really interesting to hear what people think of the characters.
Thank you very much, I'm really relieved that you think the dialogue was alright as it is not my strong point.
We will be hearing from both Frank and Gerard in the next chapter.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)