Review for "Be My Detonator."

"Be My Detonator."

(#) PartyPooperX 2012-01-09

WOW that was hot. You, my friend, are one hell of a smutty writer.

“Are you licking my nose?”
“What are you doing, then?”
“Umm….massaging your nose with my tongue?”

Made me laugh so hard I'm slightly worried for my lungs.

Wish I could write makeout scenes like you. You make my writing look pathetic.