Review for To Fight the Coming Darkness

To Fight the Coming Darkness

(#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-10-20

Just one nitpick correction for you: It's Zabini, not Zambini.

Sorry, it's one of my pet-peeves.

This chapter was pretty outstanding. Susan's argument made perfect sense, as did Harry's reaction. It's a shame we didn't get to see Peter Abbott flattened, but it's more important that Harry didn't hurt him.

Can't wait for your next update.

Author's response

I fixed it already here. I'll fix later. I must have some kind of strange mindblock when it comes to that name. I do it all the time. Glad you enjoyed the chapter.~Jim