Truly amazing as usual. I liked the dialogue in it. I was thinking Mikey was gonna wake up now any second with Pete shouting down the phone at Gerard. I can't Pete got him like this again. I thought Pete was like his... his.. saviour or something. But I'm sure he'll fix up Mikey again. He is very good at it! Update soon please
Author's response
Thank you very much; I'm really pleased that you think this went alright!
I'm relieved that you liked the dialogue, I'm really trying to improve the way that I write conversations, so to hear that you liked it really does mean a lot. Pete is still kind of his saviour, it's just that he is still a human being and is not perfect. I guess that's kinda what I wanted to show with this.
I'll try to update tonight.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)