Wooooah that was great! That phone conversation was awesome :D I'm excited now, I want to see what happens even more than before (which is afuckinglot xD). Moremormore!
Author's response
Thank you so very much; I'm really pleased that you think this chapter is alright and that the phone conversation worked. I was quite nervous about the conversation as I don't really like doing dialogue, so it's a real relief to hear that you think it went alright.
Thanks for taking the time to review! :)