Fuck off Gerard Pikey forever. And just as I was begining to forgive you. Asshole.
Super awesome chapter again the dilalog was great so you don't need to worry and I loved Pete's passion. Update soon you fantastic person!
Author's response
Yes; PIKEY FOREVER!!!! ;P
Thank you very much; I'm really pleased that you think this went alright and that the dialogue wasn't too bad. I dread dialogue so it's really uplifiting to know that you think it was alright!
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a nice review! :)