-Cough- Do a sequel -cough- This was amazing :D You nearly made me cry, and I don't cry, like at all xD If it wasn't for the fact that Frank Iero is a real person or Gerard Way or any other of the famous people included in you're story, I would say you should get it publushed, i'd buy it, you still could tho, you'd just have to change the names o the charecerts :P
Frankiexx