Gaaahhhh! This is really good - I really love the story. You're a great writer and it's really original! It's genuinely one of the best I've written in a while, and if it keeps up like this it'll definitely become of of my favourites!
What I like in particular, is how Frank's sorta seen as 'forbidden' because of Mikey, but really because he doesn't know Frank at all. It's also interesting how there's two sides to him - it's tryna figure out whether he's being genuine or not that's the good bit. Also loving how the OCs are other celebrities. No idea why, but I love that in a story.
All in all, it's really good, and I cannot WAIT for an update!
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Author's response
Blimey o' fucking Reilly. I didn't think my fic was THAT good! Seriously?! I'm so glad you like my portrayal of Frank, I try really hard for him to be a kind of mysterious character that has two completely different sides to his personality. He's difficult to write, ill be honest:/
Ohmygod, I love that in fics too, I was gonna make all the characters in this famous people anyway:') the only one who isn't famous is Olivia, and that's cos she's my best mate and begged me to be in it haha:3
I shall be posting the next chapter tomorrow if all goes to plan (I've written it, its just a matter of me actually updating it)
And about review number two: if I'm honest, I really haven't been listening to Panic or MCR that long. Only since October where my friend (Olivia) got me into them (I'm SO glad she did) so don't worry about being obsessed with a band or something, I mean, I write fucking fanfiction about a band who have only been in my life for three months! Thank you again for the two amazing reviews, I love you forever:')
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