Well, I really like the beginning. It's refreshing to have a reason behind them all running in to each other.
Dru's house being closer than a hospital is perfect honestly.
I hope to hear more about the bullying... Maybe why(though it rarely makes sense) or possibly a way for it to stop?
I'm just curious as to whether the bullying plays a part later on.
Author's response
Thank you for reviewing! and the bullying will be explained more later on in the story :)