This actually made me cry. It's so sad, and Gerard is such a bitch to people who don't deserve it! It was sweet of Pete when he was crying. And took that much for Gerard to realize that he wasn't trying to use Mikey. If I weren't a scrawny asthmatic kid, and this Gerard was real, I'd punch him. That goes for the kids at your school too. Aw hell, just use a stun gun on them, lousy fuckers. Anyway, hope that boy doesn't kill you. You can always knee em in the nuts. Also hope that you'll update soon and that Gerard doesn't start drinking again! Which I did not see coming...Also, I'll be sure to use the term 'brotherfucker' sometime in the near future!
OXO
Author's response
I'm really sorry that it made you cry!
Gerard does have a tendency to be a bit of a bitch in this story, doesn't he? But at least now he kind of realises that Pete isn't using Mikey.
I hope that boy doesn't kill me either; I shall be using your advice should I need it.
I'll try to update tonight.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review, it really does mean a lot! :)