Review for Perfectly Imperfect

Perfectly Imperfect

(#) fearsgottahold 2012-01-12

Oh my gosh Gerard. Whenever he talks I just want to gag him so he doesn't say anything else stupid, but at the same time I think 'whatever, he deserves what he gets' but then I think 'this is Gerard fucking Way we're talking about, he's just feeling over protective!' And THEN I think 'yeah, but being overprotective doesn't mean saying all that horrible stuff.' Gah. You got me head in a twist, and I still don't know where this story is going! But I do know I love it. Maybe some more dialogue would be nice, for future chapters? That's the only bad thing I can say about this, the rest is just fantastic. You are an amazing writer and you should be proud of what you come up with. Xx

Author's response

In this story I think that it is a case of Gerard needing gagging, but he is only trying to protect Mikey although it never quite turns out the way that Gerard hoped.
I shall try my hardest to do more dialogue in the next chapter; dialogue is something I struggle with but I will try my hardest!
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a nice, helpful review! :)