Oh my gosh Gerard. Whenever he talks I just want to gag him so he doesn't say anything else stupid, but at the same time I think 'whatever, he deserves what he gets' but then I think 'this is Gerard fucking Way we're talking about, he's just feeling over protective!' And THEN I think 'yeah, but being overprotective doesn't mean saying all that horrible stuff.' Gah. You got me head in a twist, and I still don't know where this story is going! But I do know I love it. Maybe some more dialogue would be nice, for future chapters? That's the only bad thing I can say about this, the rest is just fantastic. You are an amazing writer and you should be proud of what you come up with. Xx
In this story I think that it is a case of Gerard needing gagging, but he is only trying to protect Mikey although it never quite turns out the way that Gerard hoped.
I shall try my hardest to do more dialogue in the next chapter; dialogue is something I struggle with but I will try my hardest!
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a nice, helpful review! :)