Review for Perfectly Imperfect

Perfectly Imperfect

(#) GallonsOfBlood 2012-01-13

Oh fuck Gerard. Not again. THINK before you open your MOUTH. Did your parents not teach you anything? And how in hell does drinking solve the problems that you've just caused? It's going to make them a million times worse and if you were a real person I would punch you a lot more than Pete did.
I think Pete getting so angry might not've helped either, but at least he held back and cared too much about Mikey to get too angry.
I'm glad that Frank tries to help out Gerard so much, but I just think he should listen to his own thoughts and actually do what Frank says.
Oh my god it was amazing, great to read after my own shitty day at school, and I can't wait to see where this goes.

Author's response

Gerard really does need to think before he opens his mouth, doesn't he? Drinking never solves anything, least of all the sort of situation that he's just caused.
I really wanted Pete holding back because of Mikey to come across in this chapter, so I'm really gald that you picked up on that. Frank really does try to help, but Gerard is just too stubborn to listen until it's too late.
I'm really sorry to hear that you had a shitty day, I hope that the weekend treats you better.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review; it really does help me write! :)