So much suspense. I love this story so much it's crazy! I hope Frankie saves them. I really don't want Mikey to die. that would be so sad! :( This is so exciting. I can't wait to see what Frankie can do. I hope Gerard isn't drunk or something. I'm glad you picked option 2. Although I'm sure the first one would have been fantastic also. Keep it up. I really really love this story
Author's response
Thank you very much; I'm really pleased that you like this story!
I'm glad that you think this exciting, I was worried that this story is boring so it really is lovely to hear that you think it's actually exciting!
This is kind of a cross between option one and two, although it is largely option two; I kind of tweaked it because my original idea for option two was just too depressing for me to write.
Thank you ver much for taking the time to leave such a lovely review, it really does mean a lot! :)