So, I seriously love this story more than I can say in a review. I've read it twice already and it's just... perfect. Like, the characterizations, the originality, the diction. The word choice when they speak is so realistic, I can just hear them saying it. It isn't far fetched or difficult to believe, and I think it's so well-constructed, their whole universe, that it's completely easy to get lost in. Nikki is terrifying, but also very human in his own ways, and Tommy is so relatable that it's impossible not to completely sympathize with him at every turn.
I don't review often so I'm really sorry if this is too long or fucking creepy or something, but I just had to tell you how much I love this.
Oh my goodness XD No, it wasn't creepy, I love this review actually. Thank you so much. I'm trying to write the next chapter and have it up as soon as possible.