I really like this chapter. It is beautifully written and even though I like a bit of dialogue I love this chapter because it's sort of just about Mikey's though rather than his current actions. I have no idea if I'm picking it up right but this is how I view it and I love it. It was quite a sad chapter but I really wanted this chapter to be from Mikey's point of view and to be sort of updated on what he's thinking and it was. His feelings were shown very strongly I think and it made it all the more emotional to read. I really enjoyed reading it so update when you can. You must be busy with exams and things so take your time!
Author's response
Thank you very much; I'm really pleased that you liked it! I was worried that it was boring and that the hardly any dialogue thing would kill it completely, so to hear that you liked it really does mean a lot.
From what I can tell, you're picking it up perfectly. It was mainly about his thoughts and feelings, although there was definitely one current action going on in this chapter.
I doubt that I'll update tonight, so the next chapter will probably be up on Friday.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)