Perfect, as always. I really love how Mikey feels about the whole situation, because it is such a human way of coping, that it is easy to relate to, and that just makes the whole story so much more vivid and real. I really want to know how Frank is going to act around Mikey now, and how Mikey will retaliate. I love it:)
Author's response
Thank you very much; I'm really glad that you think this was alright!
I'm glad that you think Mikey's way of coping is easy to relate to, I thought that I'd messed that side of things up so to hear that you liked it is very nice to know!
Thank you sooooo much for taking the time to review! :)