Review for What I don't like about your stories...

What I don't like about your stories...

(#) thegirlwhowasonfire 2012-01-20

This is a good idea. I wanted to ask my English teacher what she thought of my writing, but even though she's really non-judgmental and everything, I still think it would be weird if she knew that I write fanfiction. So anyway, here's the link to my story: http://www.ficwad.com/story/180328
I've only got the first chapter up, but I'm planning on writing the second one soon, if not today. Thanks!