Okay, I'm gonna do my best.
I've been reading this story from the very beggining, watching how each chapter gets just a little bit deeper, breaks just a few more hearts. How you've managed to do that is beyone me, all I know is that you've created a masterpiece here and you should be beyond proud. The plotline, characters, emotion, everything is so real and so raw. And yeah, I've cried reading this. How could you not?
This chapter was, not surprisingly, brilliant. A perfect close to a series of pretty horrific events. I'm devastated Gerard died but really what else could he have done without it being unrealistic? But Frank and Ray have each other and I guess that counts for something.
What can I say that I haven't said before? This is the kind of story that changes people. Can't get better than that.
SF