Wow. Once again you have out done yourself. This is such a wonderfully written chapter. Frank is very sweet at the end but I hope he keeps his promise for Mikey. Mikey was so sad in this and He was really well-described. Great job! Also I didn't know it was your birthday so Happy Late Birthday! :)
Author's response
Thank you so very much; I'm really pleased that you think this chapter went alright!
I'm relieved that you think Mikey was well-described, I didn't know if I was writing his thoughts out clearly enough, so it's really nice to know that you think it he was well-described.
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely review! :)