aww, that was reallly cute, and sweet. I loved it! i'm more of a JT fan, but AA were adorable too:D Loved it, please keep writting!
Oh, and for RainPaw, I think (keyword=think) Mary-Sue is this 'perfect' character, and as Ficwad's rating says, either you love her, or you hate her. So she/he might not be very popular. Not sure though, so don't quote me. Anyways, great job on the oneshot!!
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Thanks..right now, a quarter of my brain is thinking about math hw (grrr..), a quarter is thinking about chapter 3 for twins, another quarter is thinking about this oneshot i'm going to write later and the last quarter is thinking about the sequel for twins...i'm overdoing it, ain't i?