FicWad

I can't even think of anything semi-intelligent to say. But I'll try (God help me). I've read all of the chapters in the space of a few hours (damn school) and this is amazing. I love the fight scene. I love the way Frank's anger is written any time that he experiences it. I love Gerard and his bipolar-ness. It's an awesome idea all in all. The chapter length is awesome. Frank's attitude toward pretty much everything is awesome. The part where he 's outside and wants the comforts of home is really realistic, along with his reaction. Gerard is a bastard for now (hopefully that changes because the 'for his own good' thing is weak on his part [not criticizing the writing, criticizing him as if he's real because I'm not sane]). And if I keep going at this rate this review will be too long. Write and update soon. That's an order.