methinks thou shouldst carry on.
studying shakespeare does shit to your head.
well, i think this is a great start! a bit of advice i would give is with-hold information to keep your readers: don't make the story line too obvious.
anyhoo, good luck! update soon (:
lina xo
Author's response
Why thankest very muchest to you good sir!
I know how you feel...
And thank you very much, I will keep that in mind. And believe me, I've already got a few twists in store...
Again thank you! New chappy will be up by next week or a few days hopefully!
xoxo chloe :)