Review for Phoenix Ashes

Phoenix Ashes

(#) Rob409 2012-02-02

its a repition

Author's response

I'm not sure what you mean by "it's a repition." That isn't constuctive at all unless you mean the idea is repetitive? I haven't seen it but once ever. That my chapters are repetitive? I thought I'd done a good job making individual personalities.

If you're going to leave a review, you should probably leave something for me to improve.