This Story Is The Best Ever!!!!
I love the way you've put the POV. And all these little things in Atlanta's mind. And the cute nicknames like Noah or the Mother or Oxy, that was quite a twist who would think some one would think that. Archie's so sweat! Carrying Atlanta even though it hurt his ankle I did that once and nearly ended up with cruchs, Great story please update soon!
Author's response
Wow, that's something I seem to be hearing from a lot of people about this story. I wonder why people think that? I'm trying really hard to make it sound like Atlanta, meaning I can't add as much detail as I want sometime sbecause she is a little dense to other peoples feelings- coughArchiecoughcough- and so I assume that like anyone she has little nicknames for her friends. Also, I'm trying to keep it somewhat real-life and so I just wondered how people would react to seeing a 'little girl' being carried around by 'sick, twisted men'. And Archie is a sweetie, or maybe there was more to his action than just a kind heart? Hm, think on that. I'll update as soon as I can ~Demenior