Review for Gaze Into His Killing Jar

Gaze Into His Killing Jar

(#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2012-02-02

Yes!
Haha, I'm glad my pestering help speed up the procrastinating. I love this story too much to not pester honestly.

... This update was amazing! The way you wrote Ray's POV was just perfect. 'Becoming extremely aware of every single tooth in my mouth. They ached and lusted for skin.' That part gave me goosebumps. I'm sooo excited for the next part.
With the way you write... I'm really hoping your next story will be Gerard/Mikey. I rarely read those but I think you could pull it off. Either way I'll read the next story as well. =)

Author's response

I'm posting my waycest right after I finish this evil. Also the waycest isn't as dark plot-heavy , but its definitely lusty, I tried to give give it a bleak dark air, in like an art filled mood way.