Oxy Lady? Oh it's so bright! Noah? Gosh Demenior this is absolutly funny! I love how you worked in the point of view and thought of all the original names. And that Oxy-lady was sheer brilliance! And gosh I couldn't stop laughing when she saw Theresa and Jay and she thought, 'Bright'! I was literally laughing like a physco maniac! You said once before in a reviwe that you felt like your stories were too dark.. well not this one. YOu can write anything you set your mind too. Eagerly waiting for an update. -NuuoaEclaire
Author's response
Haha, thank you for your awesome feedback! The Oxy-Lady was meant to be a bit of a serious moment, but I guess Atlanta has a problem taking things seriously (Who actually does, besides Jay, in CotT?) The origional name sjust sort of popped up as I was writing. Noah came along becuse I didn't want to keep writing 'Herry, Neil, Odie and Archie' (in any combination) over and over again, so I just took their innitials and tried to re-arrange them into some fairly-readable word and was surprised to find out they spelled Noah!
As for Oxy-Lady, I was going to have just someone asking if Atlanta was dieing or not, but then she got a bit more character and... I don't want to say too much in case I spoil anything. But she was fun to write, and she scares me a little too. Don't want to meet her in a dark alley, eh? Theresa and Jay? Who -wouldn't- expect them to have that kind of 'trying-to-be-secret-but-painfully-obvious-relationship'? And usually my stories have a very dark and complex theme, but this one is turning out to be a lot of fun to write, and even more surprisingly is that it's funny! Me plus humor usually equals impossible. Thanks for the encouragement and I'll get the next update up as soon as I can ~Demenior