'Just let my life trickle down the drain like raindrops dripping off a rose petal.'
You sir are a poet. this was so beautiful and there were many more lines I wanted to pick out and Ray is the best buddy ever and Frank was amazing and his speach was so lovely though Gerard was a meany and Mikey was adorkable.
Author's response
Thank you very much; I'm soooooo pleased that you think this was alright!
I really wanted to write something where Ray got a key part to it because I think that the most I've ever given him is one line of speech and I really needed someone to be the awesome best buddy. It wasn't that Gerard was being mean, more like extremely worried and disappointed with himself for not noticing. That's how I viewed it as anyway.
Loving the word 'adorkable', I need to work that into everyday conversation.
Thank you sooooo much for taking the time to review! :)