This was absolutely great. It wasn't what I expected it to be when I clicked on it, but it was so much better.
Your descriptions are good and your similes and metaphors are absolutely great.
The story itself was very inspiring and original for a fanfiction. It also gives you a lot of things to think about which something you don't usually get from fanfiction.
I love it. Thanks you for writing this. :)
Author's response
Thank you soooo much!
I kinda suck at summaries, so sorry that it wasn't what you expected but I'm glad that you think it was alright anyway! I'm really pleased that you think the similes/metaphors were okay, I worry that they just get annoying. I'm really glad that this gives you something to think about, that's kinda what I wanted with this fic so I'm really happy that it worked!
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a nice review; you've made me smile! :D