Sorry for commenting again but I read the story again and saw the question about the two shot and yes I would definitley read. Probably because you wrote it and your excellent at these Mikey/Whoever stories. So yeah it would be awesome if you made it a two shot.
Author's response
Thanks for taking the time to respond to the new author's note; I think that I will make this a two-shot, maybe not for a few days, but there will be a second part to this at a later date.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review again! :)