I'm glad you're back to writing again :) And I already love this story.
His brain has turned to mush and his scarlet lips are throbbing. All he can think about are the tiny clouds of smoke floating around in the air; how much he wants to become them. And those wild, wild hazel eyes. And those pale, pale lips. And everything in between.
Oh, I loved that part! This is really good stuff, girly. More SOON!
Author's response
Thanks, Allie. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'll try to update ASAP.